For all the editors notes, there are still a handful of grammatical errors in the review...

Seriously though I say that entirely as a joke. (And I am on team who cares about the Ed. notes as long as the reviewer is okay with the occasional interruption to their flow.) I enjoyed this review a lot. Hopefully, even if what you plan to pursue in college doesn't involve heavy amounts of writing, you continue to hold it as a hobby... you certainly have the talent already, and will only get better over time.